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Thursday, February 21, 2019

The Castle Creative Writing

I walked coldcock the narrow, moonlight lane on my g all overnment agency to the park. I was meeting pass, Leon and Tiffany. It was re eachy cold and it was beginning to get dark. I snarl nervous locomote down the lane as in that location were no lights. Eventu eachy I got to the end of the lane and as I cancelled the corner I could see the park in the distance. I could ensure summer laughing like a hyena. I carried on locomote.Leon was shining the bright torch in my face. My eyes stung and I grab retire the torch from his plump, sticky hand. He grabbed it back holding it in unity hand while holding a chocolate bar in the other.I explained why I was so late and asked what they were planning to do now that I had arrived.We claim erect been playing d bes and Tiffany dared one of us to go in the fortification up on the hill at Florences Gardens, but were all scared explained Summer. She continued, Why dont you go in at that place, Ryan?Ryan, touch ever so slightly scared , refused divulgeright reminding us of all the stories slightly that castle, especially the one about the boy who went in almost twenty years ago and still hasnt been found.Oh, theyre just myths and rumours, youre not telling me you real believe them, are you? said Summer.Well if you dont believe them, then you go in there, as youre so sure theyre not true I shouted.Summers smile dropped which made me wonder if she might be beginning to herb of grace what she had just said, but Summer isnt the type of person to back down from a dare so she replied, Fine, I will then. Ill prove to you its all lies.The castle was tall up on the hill over looking at yen stretches of green fields. The walls of the castle were jet black and looked dull and dreary. Some of the digressows were nonsensical and through with(predicate) them it was possible to see a glimpse of the dirty looking rooms inside, which were covered in dust and cobwebs.We began to make our way up the hill. By now it was pit ch black and we were all extremely cold. The wind was blowing and the leaves on the trees were rustling and the wind gushed past. I was starting to feel scared. I could sense a creepy atmosphere around the castle it reminded me of something out of a scary movie. I was beginning to think that I would favour to be back at home, snuggled up in bed with a warm cup of hot chocolate. I dont realise if the others snarl the same but I definitely didnt want them to think I was scared so I just kept my feelings to myself and kept walking up the hill towards the castle. When we finally reached the huge wooden accession Leon turned to Summer and pointed at it.Go on then. If youre so brave, you go in there and come back and tell us what you find.Ok, she whispered. There was a slight tremble in her vo sorbet, plain though on the outback(a) she was trying to look confident. As she gently pushed the gate open, it creaked loudly. She turned back. Tiffany pushed her forward.Go on she shouted.S ummer turned back and began to make her entrance into the castle. Leon, Tiffany and I looked at one another. We stood in silence listening while we could hear Summers footsteps as she journeyed further into the castle. The footsteps faded and Tiffany began to laugh.I cant believe she is actually in there. I though that when we got here she would change her mindMe, too, agreed Leon.We sit down down on the damp grass and began to discuss what we all design Summer would find in there. All caught up in our conversation, we didnt embody how long she had been gone when we perceive a long, high pitched scream. We all jumped up. Tiffany had a look of horror on her now pale face.Whats happened? Leon exclaimed.I began to shout Summers name hoping, that she would shout back, laughing, saying she was winding us up, and just trying to scare us. simply there was no reply.We should never have let her go in there. I began to say. I wonder if shes ok?One of us has to go in there, said Tiffany s ternly. We have to go and rescue her. She is obviously in trouble.Leon looked brave and agreed that he would go in and find Summer. I was extremely scared and nervous as I watched Leon go in the same door as Summer had gone in around half an hour ago. But I knew we had to do something, we couldnt just leave Summer in there. I know it was selfish but at that flake I just position how glad I was that it was Leon going into the castle and not me.The next 10 minutes passed. Nothing. Leon and Summer were now in the house and neither Tiffany or I knew what was going on or if they were alright.Weve got to go in there whispered Tiffany.Give it another 5 minutes I began. But before I could even finish my sentence, she was running towards the doors and into the castle. I hesitated. I was so nervous it was unbelievable. I was shaking I dont know whether it was because of the ice cold weather or because I was so scared, but I knew no matter how frightened I was I had to go in there. I slowly pushed open the door and peeked inside. It was pitch black. All I could see were the flickering lights ahead at the end of the long keen corridor that I was approaching. I slowly and carefully made my way towards the light.When I finally arrived at the end of the creepy corridor I was faced with ii doors. One on my right and the other on the left. I went with my stolon instinct and choose the door on my right. I quietly pushed the door open and stepped through. It was another long corridor. There were cobwebs all over the place. sparge covered the dirty walls and carpet. I walked down the second corridor.Palms sweating with the business organization of not knowing if I was going to get out of this castle alive. But I knew I couldnt go back now and I just had to keep walking. I mustiness have only been walking for a minute or so, but it seemed like forever, when I caught a glimpse of another door ahead. As I approached it, so many an(prenominal) thoughts were running through my head of what could be behind it. I hesitated for a second, then reached out to the door and pushed it hard. I was shocked when I power saw darkness and felt a bitter cold come over me. I was in the outside world again Suddenly, I heard a crash as the door slammed loudly behind me. I turned around and it was then I noticed that I was stand up right where I was standing before I went in the castle and the door I came out of was the door I went in.I felt relieved and safe but then it dawned on me that I was alone. I still didnt know where the others were. They werent anywhere around. I thought for a moment and came to the conclusion that they must still be in the house. Then I remembered there had been 2 doors when I had come to the end of the first corridor.They must have gone into the door on the left whereas I had elect the door on the right. I had to go back and go through the door and try and find them, but as I tugged on the door handle to enter the castle for the second tim e something was wrong. The door was jammed. I pulled harder and harder on the door handle but it wouldnt budge. Its now a week on and I havent seen my friends since. I hate thinking that they are going to be stuck in that castle for the rest of there lives if they even are still alive.

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